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Elevator Etiquette

  • portlandbove
  • 3 days ago
  • 1 min read

Someone tagged some trees


in the park just like if they were


a highway overpass or a boxcar


in a train yard. I’ve got no songs


for these orphans. I’ve got no money


for gas.



The hostess sat me in the corner


by the bathrooms and I haven’t seen


my waiter in hours. Don’t ask why


there’s blood on that tree stump.


Just eat the chicken. Drink whatever


they bring.



It’s up to you, you know.


You’ve got to make the night fall


and the moon rise. You have to


keep the birds from flying north


in the wintertime. Sometimes


the seasons hesitate. I can’t do it.


I’ve got a fever. I’m losing weight.


My blood is clotting


in all the wrong places.



Doesn’t everyone know someone


who overslept and missed a flight


that crashed?







Patrick Meeds lives in Syracuse, NY and studies writing at the Syracuse YMCA’s Downtown Writer’s Center. He has been previously published in Stone Canoe literary journal, the New Ohio Review, Tupelo Quarterly, the Atticus Review, Door is a Jar, Guernica, The Pinch, and Nine Mile Review among others. His first book, The Invisible Man’s Tailor, is available from Nine Mile Press.


 
 
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